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Post by Frostbite Sun Jul 21, 2013 1:47 pm

 -Ashe Freljord-


Ashe Freljord - CnC BtGx5NZ
white border=screenshot error
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Post by Anne Sun Jul 21, 2013 2:00 pm

I wish people would just upload the original image instead of a screenshot. I'm not sure about this sig, it looks very bland and the darkened lines at the top and bottom don't serve a real purpose, the subtext is the wrong color too. ~
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Post by Frostbite Sun Jul 21, 2013 3:06 pm

So the borders and Subtext? ok
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Post by Wanderlust Sun Jul 21, 2013 7:35 pm

-There is no motion in this signature. Ashe is just standing there, if you had seen Wik's Ashe signature, she was about to let an arrow go, that is movement. Renders with movement create space to portray flow and power. 

-The color of the subtext is stronger than the main text, which distracts people from it. 

-The placement of your text is in an awkward place, it doesn't exactly lay on a focal point correctly. 

-The colors are somewhat okay, but the signature lacks depth, probably due to the render being small with no motion. Sometimes empty space is good, but in this case, there is too much empty space. 

If you're using PS, go to File>Save for Web and Devices to save the picture to upload to imgur or something, that way you don't have to take a screenshot and crop it.
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Post by Orange Wed Jul 24, 2013 12:00 pm

+1 to the above^

Try those things, try filling the signature a bit more with the render.
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Post by Frostbite Wed Jul 24, 2013 4:51 pm

alrighty will do ^^
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